Review: Daddy and the Manny

Daddy and the Manny by Bella Flint
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This a sweet story. And it’s a fast and easy read. It has some angst, enough to keep it interesting. And I did enjoy it, as it was written.

But this story had all kinds of potential, given the different elements that the author put out there. All the pieces are there for an intense story. You had the always professional Manny who never stepped over any inappropriate line. There’s in the closet movie star, whose life isn’t his own. Who is all about the public persona. Add in the call from his dying ex-girlfriend, telling him about his unknown before this love child. Add into this the paparazzi and tabloids, and a sleazy ex-boyfriend of the ex-girlfriend.

Hayden is likable enough most of the time. He was a bit annoying with his whole ‘I am a movie star, I live in the public eye’ persona which keeps him from doing much of what he wants outside of the whole Hollywood thing. He’s totally clueless when it comes to his daughter, always looking to James for everything about her. In some ways he was as much a charge of James’ as was the daughter, Violet. Also, it was never really stated if Hayden was or wasn’t gay. At most there are vague hints. And yet he has this interest in James. And James winds up being his first at any kind of gay sex or relationship. James, as the Manny is calm, cool and collected most of the time. He is selfless, working to unite father and daughter. And yet he falls for his boss, wants to be a part of the family he’s helping create with Hayden and Violet.

The characters needed more development and depth. I never got a real feel for either of main characters. Violet might have been the best developed of them. She was at times smart, funny, sassy and at others a heartbreaking little girl. Things hinted in the blurb never really develop either. This is a first story for the author, and I think with time and more writing she will be an awesome writer.

I received and ARE in exchange for an honest review.


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